Talk:Eoghan O'Connell/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- Remove the second wikilink for Bury in the first paragraph as it is not necessary
- Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Celtic
[edit]- "O'Connell played for the academy teams of the Irish clubs College Corinthians and Avondale United," reword to O'Connell played for the College Corinthians and Avondale United Irish academy teams,
- "Commenting about the new contract, he said "I'm delighted and just happy to get it done"." - a comma is needed between "said" and "I'm"
- "manager Brendan Rodgers said O'Connell was outstanding and added;" - outstanding should be in quotations otherwise it should be replaced with a neutral word
- "He made his debut in a 4–1 victory over Sheffield United;" - He debuted in a 4-1 victory over Sheffield United;
- Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Bury
[edit]- "On 8 June 2017, O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury" - try O'Connell signed a three-year contract with English League One club Bury on 8 June 2017.
- "O'Connell was injured during the pre-season and was ruled out of play for 10 months." - add the specific type of injury O'Connell sustained
- "1–0 victory over Blackburn Rovers in the EFL Trophy." - the EFL Trophy link should be to 2017–18 EFL Trophy and not to the tournament in general
- Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
International career
[edit]- "for the qualifiers of 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship against Slovenia and Serbia." -reword to for the 2017 UEFA European Under-21 Championship qualifiers against Slovenia and Serbia.
- Done. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Style of play
[edit]- "His manager at Celtic, Brendan Rodgers," - Brendan Rodgers doesn't need to be wikilinked here
- Same issue about linking with when Celtic is first mentioned
- Done. 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Personal life
[edit]- "Other notable family members include his grandfather Frankie O'Connell, who served as a board delegate on the Cork County board for many years." - needs to be citated to a reliable source.
- Removed.16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
References
[edit]- References 5, 10, 15, 21, 32 and 37 are missing the authors
- 32 has no author; but the authors of others have been added. 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
Overall, you've written a neat and compact article. Just got the above quibbles to sort out. MWright96 (talk) 20:35, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
- @MWright96: The issues raised have been fixed. RRD (talk) 16:26, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb: Thank you. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:45, 16 April 2018 (UTC)