Talk:Environmental policy of the first Donald Trump administration/Archives/2017/March
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Peer Review by Rachel Chang
Great content and tone! I would say that the next step would be to edit your formatting so it resembles other Wikipedia pages- make a table of contents and include a lead section. Additionally, make sure you are using proper grammar and capitalization. I can’t wait to see what other subtopics and content you add to the page! Rachelchang (talk) 02:44, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
You guys have a lot of good information and suggestions for a new article.
In addition to talking about Rick Perry and Scott Pruitt, you could add some information about Ryan Zinke, the new Secretary of the Interior, and how he could direct the agenda of the USGS (including climate research), National Parks and protected lands in the United States.
Peer Review: by Samantha Gomez
Sgberkeley19 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC) Great start to the article! I would suggest definitely changing the works cited portion to be more complete however because you don't want to be accused of plagiarizing. Also, try to add a couple more paragraphs of detail, but great start!
Peer Review
Great work! You all highlighted some excellent points. In terms of formatting, it would be good to include a lead section by starting off with a paragraph about your topic, and also to use the Headers, Subtitles, etc, formatting tools to create a Table of contents. Content-wise, your article focuses primarily on energy, so I think it would be good to either rename it as “Energy Policy Under the Trump Administration,” or to expand and discuss other issues as well, such as Water, EJ, Food, Pollution, Resource Management, etc. I love that you are discussing Keystone XL! This would be a great point where you could “Be Bold” and neutrally state all the injustice forced upon Standing Rock. Citation: You can use the cite tool to insert links; the bibliography will automatically be formed. Keep up the important work! I can't wait to see the rest of this! HELI (talk) 00:19, 11 March 2017 (UTC)