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Reviewer: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 20:06, 29 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]


Surprise! Yep this will be my first GA review in a long time. So I will review this article for you, nothing too complicated I promise! Erick (talk) 20:06, 29 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Yay lolz. .jonatalk 20:06, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • I'm guessing by the song cover on the infobox, it was released as a promotional single for Enamorada de Ti. If so, then perhaps "format" and "type" should read [[Promotional recording|Promotional single]] (but leave it as a song infobox). This is just a suggestion though.
  • Sources are not needed on the lead unless they are quotes. You can put the footnotes that describes the song's genre on the genre parameter on the infobox.
  • "because she is "in love with him"." Quotations need citations.
  • "When she performed the song, Selena emulated dance moves by Michael Jackson and Janet Jackson" This is probably not best fit for the lead. Remove it please.

Background

  • "He said that Abraham was told by Jose Behar, president of EMI Latin, that several pop-music executive producers were going to attend an upcoming performance by Selena and her band." Use last names rather than the first name (Quintanilla, Jr. if it's the father or Quintanilla III if it's the brother).
  • "The remix version on Enamorada de Ti (2012) is a merengue duet with Juan Magan." → "The remix version featured on Enamorada de Ti (2012) is a merengue duet with Juan Magan."

Critical reception and legacy

  • "In 1997, "Is It the Beat?" was released posthumously on the soundtrack for Selena's biographical film and as a single; the recording included a rap verse found on "Enamorada de Ti"" How about "the recording included a rap verse taken directly from "Enamorada de Ti"" or something like that?

Misc.

  • I noticed that you didn't mention the song ranking on the Latin Regional Mexican Digital Songs on the body of the article.

I'm going to put this article on hold and will be happy to pass it once the above issues are addressed. Erick (talk) 18:29, 5 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

 Done .jonatalk 20:06, 9 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like you addressed everything I listed above. Therefore, I'm passing this article. Good job! Erick (talk) 06:26, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]