Talk:Emotions (Mariah Carey album)/GA1

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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 07:29, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

"Additionally, Emotions features influences ~~of a~~ range of genres such" --> change to "from a"
"Upon release, Emotions received generally mixed reviews from music critics~~; many of them had mixed feelings regarding the album's material.~~" Remove where i have striked as its redundant, of course the material is the thing that is mixed, they are not commenting on her face =P
- Haha Sassy :P

"He called the album's lead single "bone chilling," however calling some of the album's high notes "vocal range overkill." Not a proper sentence. Please rewrite.
"He outed" is used twice, this is not the word you are looking for; i would use "called" "chose" "selected" ect ect, something like that.
"however calling most of the album unoriginal and not an improvement over her debut." Tense issue, however he called
"DeKnock called some of the album's ballads "boring," however calling Carey's voice "breathtaking." Again, tense, "he called" not calling.

Overall great work on this article. Please message me once these are addressed. - (CK)Lakeshade - talk2me - 07:29, 30 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Unless im blind, "dance-pop" in the info box is not sourced anywhere or mentioned in the article.
"According to Nielsen SoundScan, the album's stateside sales are estimated at over 3,584,000, not including sales from BMG music clubs." is also unsourced.