Talk:Emma Blackery/GA1
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Reviewer: Hiya111 (talk · contribs) 20:45, 28 October 2019 (UTC)
Will be taking a look at this article..
Overall, the article is written in simple and clear English - this is fine. My other thoughts however..
- What does "experimented with paid promotion" mean? Same goes for CC-BY licence (don't assume the reader knows what it is)
- Make sure you link to/explain briefly an EP. Not everyone knows that it stands for "Extended Play"
- "Blackery founded her second independent record label" - When did she ever start her first record label? There was no mention of a first.
- Why is there an image from a Zelda video game? (I know she's a fan, but not sure that's relevant here)
- Why is the track listing for the album Villains here?
- I understand it doesn't need to be a long biography - but readers may want to know, perhaps, about her artistry, influence on the public, channel demographics etc.
Article looks stable and well-illustrated with images. In my view however, needs a bit more polishing to be a Good Article. Hiya111 (talk · contribs) 12:46, 29 October 2019 (UTC)