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Overall the draft is looking good. I would address some awkward phrasing and word choices throughout the final draft. Some of the words you've used can be changed for more descriptive (but still neutral) language. I think a section specifically on her awards would really help sell her as an important figure in sports climbing. Really interesting so far!Syoung18 (talk) 18:38, 27 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

It sounds like her climb on Everest could be its own section entirely. Are there any sources where you could back up some of your facts with quotes from Emily? I think fleshing out this section would really help make the article more substantial. 174.34.28.252 (talk) 19:03, 27 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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