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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk21:26, 6 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 11:39, 25 November 2020 (UTC).[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nice nomination; Passes all checks for DYK. I have a few notes below that will be good to address before promoting to homepage. Ktin (talk) 19:44, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Additional Suggestions.

  1. Consider one round of copy edits across the article.
  2. Expand the lede to more than a sentence. There is definitely content in the body (e.g. organizations that she has represented) that can be thinned down and introduced into the lede.
  3. Combine private life, death and legacy sections. Currently they are small by themselves that they do not warrant three separate sections.

Happy to look at it once the changes are done. Ktin (talk) 20:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • @CeeGee:, Thanks. I still think one more round of copy edit for grammar and language will be required before the article can be ready for homepage. Go ahead and take that pass. I will lend a hand later tonight once you take a pass.
  • @Ktin: Thank you for your efforts. However, the level of my English does not allow me to detect what you complain. Sorry about that. Maybe you are so nice to help. It won't prevent you from approving the DYK-nom later. CeeGee 10:44, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • @CeeGee:, no worries. I have taken a pass at the copy-edits. Have a read to see if something is incorrect. I referred to the links to some of the Turkish newspapers that you had included, but, I had to rely on online translators. Re: a quote about her photography tactics while covering football matches, can you read the link and confirm if it is a quote from her or is it a quote from her husband? The translation was ambiguous. Ktin (talk) 16:49, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]