Talk:Electric (Robyn song)/GA1
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 17:46, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
Happy to offer a review. Josh Milburn (talk) 17:46, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
- "Robyn wrote the track in collaboration with Ulf Lindström and Johan Ekhé, who also helmed production." Ambiguous who the "who" refers to.
Done - Perhaps "Background" could be renamed "Production"?
- I feel that it's fine to call it "Background", but if you prefer "Production" we can change it! Pancake (talk) 10:57, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
- "The maxi single accommodates the radio edit and remixes by Mad Professor, Internal Dread and Berger." accommodates is a slightly odd word, here? Done
- "While reviewing My Truth, a writer for Nöjesguiden highlighted the single and "Main Thing"." Highlighted? What do you mean by this? Done
- "Bjurman felt the R&B elements were "expected" and" What does this mean? Done
- Is there any chance of a separate section for the music video?
- I don't think so; it would be extremely short as I haven't even been able to find the director. Pancake (talk) 10:57, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
- You could offer a synopsis (you wouldn't need to source that as long as you were uncontroversially describing what happens in the video) and you could use Template:External media to link to the Vevo version of the video on YouTube? Josh Milburn (talk) 16:44, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
- I don't know how to put this video into words. A lot of flashy stuff happens, yet nothing important happens. Help me out? Pancake (talk) 11:00, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
- You could offer a synopsis (you wouldn't need to source that as long as you were uncontroversially describing what happens in the video) and you could use Template:External media to link to the Vevo version of the video on YouTube? Josh Milburn (talk) 16:44, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
- I don't think so; it would be extremely short as I haven't even been able to find the director. Pancake (talk) 10:57, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
This is a pretty short article, but, given the limited release and the age, this is perhaps unsurprising. Have you checked any Swedish newspaper databases, if there are such a thing? Josh Milburn (talk) 18:05, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
- I have searched everywhere like a maniac for other reviews and articles relating to the song in general, but sadly I haven't found any other than what's already in the article. :/ Pancake (talk) 10:57, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
I've had another look though, and I'm going to go ahead and promote. This is a very short article, but, given that it was not released outside of Sweden and didn't even reach the top of the charts there, I'm actually fairly impressed with how much information you do have. The writing's solid, the sources are good, it's neutral, the media is appropriate... Good enough for me. Nice job. Josh Milburn (talk) 19:37, 14 April 2015 (UTC)