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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 05:49, 28 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I generally don't tackle music articles, but this has waited for review far too long so I'll do my best. Wizardman 05:49, 28 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Almost forgot about this; here are the issues I found:

  • "Cooder's 15th album" the lead writes it as fifteenth; keep consistent.
  • " Its lyrics attribute the conservatives Koch Brothers to the" conservative, though not sure if the word's needed since the context makes it rather clear.
  • "and followed on August 20 in the United Kingdom and Ireland,[34] and on August 21 in North America and Australia" rm first and

Just a couple minor tweaks; I'll put the article on hold. Wizardman 19:43, 31 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Dan56 (talk) 03:47, 1 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman 04:01, 1 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]