Talk:Eleanor Furneaux Smith

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Draft feedback

Wait—I asked you to do your drafting in the sandbox, not on the live page itself!
+ Some good material added!
- Still fairly short. I think you're around 500-600 words when everything's put together.
+ Stub material got added to the sandbox—good!
+ Contributions from all three of you (although not all on the same page).
+ Good use of citations!
Suggestions for improvement:
- Put everything together on the sandbox page. Then develop on the sandbox page. Work with the live Wikipedia article later.
- You'll need to flesh this out more. We can discuss how you might do that.

Phbrownacmorg (talk) 03:05, 29 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]