Talk:El Mundo Gira/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 14:47, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Have made general fixes in the article, just minor quibbles:

"What they discover is a bizarre fungal growth affecting illegal immigrants." place comma between 'growth' and 'affecting'
Placed citation tags for bits that need refs.
"and the title of the episode means "The World Turns" in Spanish." Given that the article mentions "soap opera-like aspects", I take it that the title can also bare reference to As the World Turns?
"...Snow was forecd to replace his entire score..." spelling error

On hold for changes, no issues with sourcing. Lemonade51 (talk) 15:21, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your review. I believe I have addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:10, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]