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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It will be great to review one of your volcanoes again. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:52, 5 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

General
  • I see some duplinks. You can fix them yourself by this tool.
Lead
  • Citations are generally excluded from the lead unless you are saying something controversial.
Geology
  • What is "poryphyric"?
  • What is "metasomatic alteration"?
Iron-rich deposits
  • Try adding some subheadings
  • These iron oxide deposits were found in 1958 By?
Petrology
  • The iron-containing rocks are subordinate Can you add what exactly "subordinate" means here?
  • You can try combining a few lines using semicolons.
  • crustal contamination or isotopic effects during fractional crystallization Wikilinks possible?
  • Some atmospheric water influence Does this mean "influence of atmospheric moisture"?
  • Link sulfur at first mention
  • What is "hydrothermal alteration" (if you link this, link at first mention in the article) and "alteration halo"?
Environment
  • Can you explain a bit about "low bushland"? Bushland may be linked, but some readers may not understand "low"

The prose reads well and is quite interesting. Those were all my comments. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:52, 7 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]