Talk:El Gallito/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"El Gallito ("The Little Rooster") started his professional wrestling career as a mascota for El El Gallo" - the first "El" is redundant
"As a mascota, he portrayed a diminutive version of El Gallo, complete with the same rooster character as El Gallo." - and competed as the same rooster character as him.
Cockscomb does not need to begin with a capital letter
"As a mascota he would accompany El Gallo to the ring, designed mainly - was created primarily
"to appeal to kids" - more formal; children
"and help El Gallo portray" - and assist El Gallo to portray

"and his fellow mascotas Mije and fellow Zacarias el Perico to help establish" - repetition of the word "fellow"
"Gallito, Mije, Angelito, and Chamuel took on Microman, Atomo, Guapito, and Zacarias . In the end, Microman pinned Chamuel to win the tournament while - Gallito, Mije, Angelito, and Chamuel took on Microman, Atomo, Guapito, and Zacarias, which saw Micropan pin Chamuel to win the tournament while Galliot was the fourth to be eliminated from the match.
"four weeks later the Micro-Estrellas" - Four weeks later, the Micro-Estrellas
"With the popularity of the Micro-Estrellas" - think there maybe a word missing from this piece of text

"While working for CMLL, El Gallito, like all CMLL workers" - repetition of working/workers
"While working for CMLL, El Gallito, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - too much repetition of the term "CMLL"
"His first non-CMLL match was on June 14, 2017. on a Promociones El Cholo show in Tijuana, Baja California," - the period in the middle of this sentence is unneeded
"which featured Gallito and Microman defeating Mije and Zacarias." - saw

Reference 2 looks like it's missing the page numbers and ISBN number?
Reference 4 from The Telegraph should include Agence France-Presse as the agency that provided the story

Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:21, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 Everything has been addressed. Reference 2 is a magazine publication with no ISBN or bar code on the front, unfortunately. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:10, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. I have made a minor edit to the article. MWright96 (talk) 19:47, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]