Talk:El Felino/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:19, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Delink Mexican per MOS:OVERLINK
"In 1989 he adopted the "Felino" ring character in 1989," - repetition of the phrase "in 1989"
"Up until the summer of 2014 his wife," - don't use phrases such as "the summer of xxxx" per MOS:SEASON
"He has also won several major CMLL tournaments, the 1999 Torneo Gran Alternativa," - including the

"become known under the ring name "Negro Casas", while his younger brother, Erick Francisco Casas, would be known under the name" - close repetition of the phrase "the name"
""Heavy Metal. - the closing quotation marks are missing from this name
"Casas was married to Blanca Rodríguez, aka professional wrestler Princesa Blanca" - who is known as
"Casas had two son with his previous wife" - children
"is a professional wrestler known as Dalys La Caribeña," - the "La" in the text highlighted in bold should not start with a capital letter

"During the early parts of his career he worked mainly in the local Arena Apatlaco in Mexico City." - not mentioned by the SuperLuchas source attached to it
"but ended up losing it to El Pantea on January 27, 1985" - this sentence is missing a period to end it

"in EMLL he adopted a new masked persona," - {{xt|In EMLL, he
"he wore an orange mask with black tiger stripes as well as an orage full body suit" - typo; orange
"He lost the championship to Ciclón Ramírez on May 21, 1993 as part of their ongoing feud" - this sentence is missing a period to end it
"conclusively ending the storyline between the two as he defeated Ciclón Ramírez one more time." - more concise; again}
"His second reign came to an end on June 21, 1994 as he the championshiip" - better and eliminates and typo in this sentence as he relinquished the championship
"earn his way to the sem-finals, but lost to El Hijo del Santo to be eliminated from the tournament." - to the semi-finals, where he lost at this stage to El Hijo del Santo to be eliminated from the tournament.
"The championship ended up being vacated after match on March 8" - more complete; after the match

"referee El Tirantes hair was shaved off instead." - Tirantes'
"By the end of the year El Felino left AAA, with his last for the company" - his last match

"El Felino worked his first match back for CMLL on October 22, only 5 days after his last match for AAA." - five per MOS:NUMERAL
"The feline duo defeated Fugaz and Scorpio Jr. in the first round," - the word "feline" is not needed in this sentence
"On July 26, 2002, El Felino and Black Tiger survived a 16-man torneo cibernetico elimination match as the first stage of the 2002 Leyenda de Plata tournament." - repetition of the year should be avoided where possible
"El Felino defeated Black Warrior to win the 2002 Leyenda de Plata tournament." - how about the change the word highlighted in bold to competition for variety?
"His third CMLL World Welterweight Championship reign last over 2 years," - reign of more than two years
"ended by El Satánico on November 25, 2003 in Mexico City." - was ended by
"The Mexican National Trios Championship reign lasted 476 days, as they lost the championship March 25, 2005" - lost the championship on March 25, 2005
The Casas' brothers trios championship reign in IWRG lasted 133 days, until Cerebro Negro, Veneno and Scorpio Jr. won the championship from them." - repetition of the word "championship"

"Felino's wife Princesa Blanca joined the group in early 2009, turning Rudo to work with La Pestra, the turn led to Princesa Blanca winning the Mexican National Women's Championship from Marcela on January 30, 2009." - the second mention of the year is not needed since it is mentioned earlier in this sentence
"after each wrestler won a fall a Puma King," - typo; the correct spelling is against
Wikilink steel cage match
"A week prior to the match, Panther was disqualified in a tag team match," - repetition of the word "match"
"After the main event of the February 21's show between Místico," - on the show between Místico on February 21,
Wikilink undercard for non-wrestling readers
when he was pined by Soberano Jr. as the ninth overall." - and became the ninth wrestler to be eliminated from the contest. to match TheGladitories source
"but was eliminated in the opening round when he was pined by Soberano Jr. as the ninth overall." - typo; pinned
"allowe El Felino to work for ROH in August 2019" - typo; allowed

Notes U and Z both need an reliable source to verify the information contained within the notes

"Copa Ovaciones (2001) – with Fuerza Guerrera" - this achievement requires a reliable source to verify it

Be consistent in how you write Pro Wrestling History in the References
Reference 7 is missing the author of the source
That same source should begin with a Capital letter and not be entriely in lower case letters
Reference 35 is missing the publisher of the source and the date it was accessed
Reference 36: ""2005 Lo Mejor de la Lucha Mexicana" [2005 The best of Mexican wrestling]. Súper Luchas s (in Spanish)" - the stray s in the work field should be deleted
Reference 42 is dead and will need to be archived
References 57 and 58 are missing the dates they were accessed and the dates they were published
Reference 70 should have the work as Súper Luchas not the publisher
Reference 73 should be spelt as CageMatch not cagematch

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:13, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]