Talk:Effects of Hurricane Charley in North Carolina/GA1
GA Review
[edit]- Spell out "150 mph" to "150 miles per hour"; same goes for other primary units
- For some of the references, the publisher is before, for some, they are after – The publishers in URLs go after the titles
Gary King (talk) 03:15, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
- "and at its peak intensity it attained 150 mph (240 km/h) winds" - would read better if you removed the "it"/"its"
- In the first image caption, can you (briefly) describe the path it follows.
- "which was further extended to Chincoteague" - it reads like Oregon Inlet was extended... obviously not right, so clarify.
- "The storm generally produced an estimated storm surge of 2–3 ft (0.5–1 m)" - could trim a few of these words ("generally" etc.) so it flows a bit better.
Edit conflicted with Gary above, but these are my notes. —Giggy 03:22, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
- Comments fixed (Gary's, too). I'll be away, so just let me know on my talk page what happens. Cheers, Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 11:15, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
Something is wrong with the format of reference 9. Anyone know how to fix that? Cite web is a big blind spot for me. Thegreatdr (talk) 13:18, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed; you missed a "|" between "author=title=" Naerii 15:48, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
- "of 5.05 in (128 mm) of" – needs unit expansion
- "65,000 without power." → "65,000 people without power." – just for clarification's sake
- "150 mph (240 km/h)" – unit expansion
- "Gov. Mike Easley" – "Governor Mike Easley"
- " Impact" section still needs unit expansion
Gary King (talk) 17:52, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
- See how that looks. Thegreatdr (talk) 18:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
Great job – this article has reached the Good Article criteria and has therefore been passed. Gary King (talk) 18:05, 29 June 2008 (UTC)