Talk:Edwar Ramírez/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:03, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

After reading the article, I was going to quick pass it however; "Personal Life" needs expansion or that small sentence needs to be merged. There are 2 dablinks that needs to be fixed and 2 deadlinks. Please fix before passing article. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 15:24, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Dablinks and dead links are fixed. As far as the personal life goes, I expanded it a little bit, but have a hard time finding anything on more on his early life or family. I know that his father helped reinvent him, that's mentioned in the Angels section.[1][2][3] – Muboshgu (talk) 16:43, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You still have yet to address the dablinks. Please fix before passing. Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:51, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed them with this edit. I guess the tool hasn't updated itself yet, because if you click on "fix links", you get this. – Muboshgu (talk) 16:59, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for clarifying, passing article. Great job on another article! Best, Jona yo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 17:02, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]