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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
Happy to review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking this on Sainsf.--SabreBD (talk) 11:59, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:48, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
- In the lead
- When did the High Middle Ages begin? (in "Schools" as well)
- Done I linked this to the article - dates are a bit unclear.--SabreBD (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- developed into "household schools Closing quotes
- Done--SabreBD (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- Can you wikilink or explain Latin curriculum?
- Done--SabreBD (talk) 08:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- In Sources
- It would be good to link Aberdeen
- Done--SabreBD (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- In Schools
- Although reading may also have been taught in these schools, the students were probably taught by lay women or nuns What exactly is the contrast for which "although" is used?
- Done--SabreBD (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- In Universities
- of which John Mair (1467–1550) was the most important figure "most important" according to whom?
- OK, I don't know how to fix this. He was the most important figure and not every supportive statement can be nailed down.--SabreBD (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- I am deleting that statement.--SabreBD (talk) 08:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- Do as you think proper, the only reason I felt uneasy about it was that such claims should generally come directly from some reliable source. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- I am deleting that statement.--SabreBD (talk) 08:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- About the citations
- Ref. 3 needs a page range.
- The version used is electronic and does not have them - that is why the title is linked.--SabreBD (talk) 08:33, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- Fine. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
- Images
- The source of File:Monifeithpictishharper.jpg is unclear
- There is no way I can fix that as I did not upload it - so I have deleted it.--SabreBD (talk) 08:50, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
That should be it. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:48, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
- All issues look resolved. I am glad to promote this. Great job! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:55, 21 May 2016 (UTC)