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Former good article nomineeEdmund Wainwright was a Sports and recreation good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
April 19, 2016Good article nomineeNot listed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 26, 2016.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Edmund Wainwright was considered to be amongst those who resurrected South Australian cricket?


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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 13:17, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  13:17, 18 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm so sorry to do this, but I'm going to have to quick-fail the article as it doesn't meet the GA criteria yet. It lacks in comprehension; the lead itself is too short and there isn't enough general content in the body to make it a comprehensive enough article. Can more be added about Wainwright? Also, I think there's a format error in the Cricketing career section, the quote isn't meant to go off into italics - just de-italicise it! "Standing over 6 feet tall" needs a metric conversion, and the death section can be merged into a life section. Once the article is expanded, I'll be happy to review it again! Let me know if you have any questions. I really hate failing articles as a whole... JAGUAR  21:39, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Jaguar, your feedback is important as it helps editors understand how to improve articles. Thank you. If I find more material on Wainwright, I shall add and reapply for GA (and would ping you in that case). Thank you. Xender Lourdes (talk) 19:20, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]