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The article was very in depth on Edith's life and the details of her life. I was impressed with that. I may suggest that you make a section for the list of her famous works and then you could put all the images on your page in relation to the description, rather than randomly on the side. Additionally, I might try and accumulate more sources whether they are other people's reviews on her work, or her own, just so you don't have one main source. The one thing I would focus on is having a well-rounded article with equal information in most sections with good references, instead of one large section with one reference and weaker sections. I found this somewhat applicable to my own article, to attempt to find a balance of information in all sections. Mw4753a (talk) 17:13, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]