Talk:Ediel López Falcón

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A fact from Ediel López Falcón appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 January 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that after Mexican drug lord Ediel López Falcón was ordered to forfeit US$15 billion in the U.S., Mexican authorities wanted to keep fifty percent of it?

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Hi there MX, hope you are well. Just a couple of comments from me.

"Several members of the Gulf Cartel were arrested or killed during this time, while others like López Falcón sought for safe haven and relocated in the U.S with their families."

I have changed this to "Several members of the Gulf Cartel were arrested or killed during this time, while others like López Falcón sought for safe haven and relocated to the U.S with their families." (change of "in" to "to"). If they were in the U.S. before relocating, then it would be "in", but if they were in Mexico, then it would be "to". My question is - were they in Mexico or the U.S. before relocating?

Ediel was in Mexico and fled to the U.S. Thank you for clarifying.

The term "or" often means and/or in the contexts you have said "and/or", simply meaning that "and/or" can be changed to "or".

Thank you for letting me know.

"The agent did confirm that they had information..." please clarify which of the two agents this is.

I added "The agent present in court" since it was him, not the lead one who was absent. Thank you for the thorough copyedit, Willbb234. MX (✉ • ✎) 07:04, 14 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Willbb234^Talk (please {{ping}} me in replies) 20:30, 13 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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@Vami IV: Thanks for the review. Please see my responses below. Cheers, MX (✉ • ✎) 23:09, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

~~sought for safe haven Axe "for".~~

Done

~~The second paragraph of "Arrest and trial" should be condensed to the brass tacks.~~

Fixed I've trimmed down several parts from this paragraph. Let me know what you think.

~~How/when was López Falcón finally identified?~~

Newspaper achives do not indicate when he was identified.

~~were the first to announce of López Falcón's conviction Delete "of".~~

Done

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