Talk:Ecstatic dance/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 20:01, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Opening review again :) Kingsif (talk) 20:01, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Notes expanding on other page:

• Lead now improved to GA standard

Thanks.

• Ecstasy section now suitable

Thanks.

• Made some tweaks to better introduce mythology and make clear it's not a recording of true events that we know of; removed info that doesn't have direct relevance

Noted.

• needs attention "Syrian goddess's priests'" - I'm just a little uncertain with the plurals here, if you'd explain?

Reworded.

• Good use of map and table layout; the gallery may have one or two too many images but not a big issue

Noted.

• needs work Tantra sentence could still be incorporated into section better

Reworked.

• Cut out some remaining promotional 5Rhythms material

Noted.

• I've restructured the Modern section

Noted.

• Rest looks good

Noted.

• Parts with bold note to be looked at, otherwise at GA standard
• @Chiswick Chap: better Kingsif (talk) 23:31, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

All done now.

Great! Thanks for working on it so well! Kingsif (talk) 14:22, 30 September 2019 (UTC)