Talk:Dwight Yoakam/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 19:47, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll look at this over the next week. Back in high school I use to listen to a station that would play "Intentional Heartache" frequently in the middle of the night. Hog Farm _Talk 19:47, 18 September 2022 (UTC)

• ". At the time of Yoakam's birth, his father was serving in the United States Army during the Korean War." - didn't the active fighting with the US in Korea end before 1956? There's still troops there of course but I don't think implying that it was the active conflict is the best way to handle this
• "Yoakam and some classmates formed a band to compete in the school's talent show" - any specific genre?
• "The two met when performing together at a concert in late 1999." - I'm a bit confused as to what exactly this is suppose to signify - is this the meeting between Dwight and Buck Owens that led to the collaboration? If so, it can be stated more clearly
• "His first Audium release was 2002's Population Me" - source says this was released in 2003
• "Artists covered included John Prine's "Paradise"" - link Paradise (John Prine song) (a personal favorite for me, both Prine's and Sturgill's versions)
• Spot-checked a few sources, only issue noted is the Population Me release date above

I think that's all from me. Hog Farm _Talk 03:29, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

• @Hog Farm: Think I got everything you asked for. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 20:32, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

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