Talk:DuckTales the Movie: Treasure of the Lost Lamp/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: SL93 (talk · contribs) 06:19, 18 August 2019 (UTC)

• The plot section is too lengthy.

• The voice cast is not referenced.

• The 8th reference should not be in all capital letters.

• There are three citation needed tags in the production section.

• "Director/producer Bob Hathcock revealed in an interview that the film began as a five-part episode for the TV series, adding: "Our first idea was to see if there was a way to release that as a feature." - : should not be used to show that someone said something.

• "Hathcock spent most of his time between London and Paris, while ink/paint/camera work was done in China, and additional work in Spain." - A list of things should never be written with slashes.

• The box office section needs to be referenced.

• The critical reception section has reviews combined into weird run-on sentences.

• "A more positive review came from Chris Hicks of Deseret News, who claimed he went in, "with very low expectations ... I was pleasantly surprised at how clever and funny the film is." - This is an interesting way to mention a review. I can't say that I have seen it before.

• "Reviewing it for TV, ABC's Joel Siegel said: "Here is a movie you can take the kids to you'll all enjoy." - I'm not sure why : is there and I doubt that the review had bad grammar.

• Variety called the film a, "lushly animated, smartly scripted, wise-quacking adventure." - Just remove the comma.

• The home media section has a citation needed tag.

• "The DVD release is in widescreen presentation (1.66:1) in region 1 and other countries]]." - I'm not sure what wikilink was intended to be placed here.

• "The HD version of DuckTales the Movie: Treasure of the Lost Lamp is available on Disney's Movies Anywhere service]] -" This is not referenced and I'm not sure what wikilink was intended to be placed here.

• "A soundtrack album was released by Intrada Records in 2017, including David Newman's score, but not the film's end title version of the TV series theme]]" - The same as above.

• None of the tracks are referenced. The fact that David Newman wrote the tracks is not referenced.

• animated-movies.net is an unreliable source.

• WorthPoint cannot be reliably used in this case.

• Disney Afternoon Forever is unreliable and access is denied.

On top of this, there needs to be more details on how it performed in the box office, the soundtrack, and sequels.

I am quick-failing this which makes this the second time. SL93 (talk) 06:19, 18 August 2019 (UTC)