Talk:DuWayne Deitz/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 00:42, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Added American, college, high school track coaches, track athlete, shot putters and marines cats
• Where'd you get his birthday?
  • As with his death date, it was from his from his grave stone - is that allowed as a source?
• I guess you couldn't find his birthplace?
• No death place?
  • Couldn't find birth / death place.
• ref 2 is dead and its cited 14 times
  • @WikiOriginal-9: Dang it! The Wayback Machine never archived it! What now? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:10, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Maybe contact miacathletics.com? ugh, we might have to fail this nom unless we can find more sources to replace this. Do you have another article you can replace this with? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Awwww yeahhh, I found it. I just went to football on their website and searched the 2018-2019 archives. I archived it. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:11, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
        • Great! Maybe you should add the archive in the ref so that we never have to go through this again. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 30 October 2023 (UTC)
• Is Korean conflict specifically different than Korean War. I cant check ref 2 since its dead. I was trying to add Category:United States Marine Corps personnel of the Korean War
  • I'm gonna say yes. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 12:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
• "In the subsequent years St. Thomas compiled records" comma after years
  • Added.
• Should we add 1973 and 1979 Minnesota Intercollegiate Athletic Conference (MIAC) Coach of the Year to the infobox? Also the 2 conference titles.
  • Added.
• "Deitz died on August 22, 2018" I dont see that in the ref?
• Wheres his birthday from?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:59, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:19, 30 October 2023 (UTC)