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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 05:01, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:01, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this tomorrow, but very first thing I noticed is that the first ref has no newspaper listed; add that in. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:08, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:11, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

After the issues are fixed, I would suggest trying to find someone to give this a copyedit, as the prose isn't very good. I'll put the article on hold. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 15:35, 12 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:29, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]