Talk:Dragon Quest X/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

And then there were two... Cognissonance (talk) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

Synopsis

• "the protagonist forges a friendship bond" — Improve prose: "the protagonist forges a friendship".

Development

• I suggest illustrating the return of veteran developers, using images of art designer Akira Toriyama and composer Koichi Sugiyama. Another image depicting the Squenix game engine could also be useful.
• CGI — Link to Computer-generated imagery
• "¥1200 and ¥2000, then set it at ¥1000" — Parenthesize the $ equivalent for each.

Overall

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: You have made a near flawless article. Congrats! You're my first immediate pass.

   Pass/Fail:

   @ProtoDrake: And you always remember your first... Cognissonance (talk) 04:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)