Talk:Dr. Robotnik's Mean Bean Machine/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 12:08, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• "alternatively known as Dr. Robotnik and His Mean Bean Machine" - Footnote this for better readability and say this title is used on parts of Europe. Can remove the footnote under cover art then as its repeating same info.

• Done. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Gameplay

• "coloured Beans" - decapitalize Beans

• Oops, done. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

• "is essentially the multiplayer component" - No, it IS the muliplayer component, remove "essentially"

• Not sure why I added that! Removed. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Development

• "exact copy" --> "clone" or "reskin" and link Video game clone

• Linked. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

• The source doesn't say that Mean Bean is a clone of Puyo Puyo. Use HCG101 1 or Eurogamer mentions it too.

• Thanks, added that and the Eurogamer source. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Reception

• "Puyo Puto" sp

• Fixed. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

• "and would satisfy fans of the genre" --> ", but still would satisfy fans of the genre"

• Rephrased. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Links

• No dead links, and not required but I always recommend to archive key sources

Everything else looks, good. I used to play this on Sonic Mega Collection all the time. TarkusAB 12:43, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: thanks for the review! I've addressed all of the above and archived everything that could be archived, with the exception of a couple. I used to play this on the Sonic Mega Collection too—not actually a bad game. JAGUAR  13:02, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

@Jaguar: OK looks good! TarkusAB 13:15, 11 February 2017 (UTC)