Talk:Down a Dark Hall

Down a Dark Hall has been listed as one of the Language and literature good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: November 2, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Down a Dark Hall/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 03:44, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Overall, a very good article. Just have a few things I would like to see.

Perhaps add a little more to the lead about its background? For example, the feminist issue sounds interesting.

I went ahead and added that to the lead. Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A couple sentences in the Reception section could be paraphrased.

I paraphrased the one quote from The New York Times. Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Is there any information on the sales for the book, or box office results for the film?

I couldn't find any information about the sales for the book. I did however find box office results, so I included them in the article. Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, BOM, of course. I could have just as well added that myself, haha. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 10:08, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

One link redirects to a different website (I'm guessing it was a name change). It was DVD Talk, which is now Top Seven Reviews (I'm not sure if it's reliable however). There's also at least one dead link, though I have since archived the sources.

I can't find the reference you're referring to. What's the title of the article? Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Abryn: Thanks for reviewing the article, it's really appreciated. How does it look now? Fearstreetsaga (talk) 01:09, 1 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, sorry I didn't get back to you sooner. I dunno what the heck I was thinking, I must have gotten my wires crossed and mistook a source from another article as being from this one. Many apologies! The article looks good, nice job on this. I'm ready to pass. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 10:08, 2 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]