Talk:Douglas Engelbart/GA1

GA Review

Pass

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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 06:21, 10 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Short sections and paragraphs are discouraged. In your case, it's the "Personal" and "Death" section. (GA criteria)
- I worked a bit on that. diff Disavian (talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article. (GA criteria)
- I worked to make it better summarize the article. If it's missing anything obvious, let me knowaye diff Disavian (talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
There should not be anything in the lead not mentioned in the rest of the article. (GA criteria)
- As far as I can tell, everything in the lead is contained in the article. Let me know if I'm missing something specific. Disavian (talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Biographies require {{Persondata}}.
- The persondata template is present and has data. Disavian (talk) 02:19, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The review is thus on hold. --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 07:47, 10 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing the article. :) I'll see what I can do... Disavian (talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Complete the task. Then, passed. --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 09:12, 17 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 12:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]