Talk:Double-double/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman 06:16, 4 December 2009 (UTC) This is a nice article overall. Combining everything into one seems to help make it comprehensive and complete. Anyway, here's some issues I found:
- "The most common double-double combination is points-rebounds and follows by points-assists." is followed maybe? This sentence doesn't feel worded right.
- Reworded—Chris!c/t 07:08, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- "Oldest player: Karl Malone (Los Angeles Lakers), the only 40-year-old player to do so," If there's an exact age for youngest there should be one for oldest.
- Is there a reason why Gary Grant's triple double doesn't have a date or opponent on it? Can't imagine it would be too hard to find.
- "The first American female player above the high school level to officially record a quadruple-double was Ann Meyers, who achieved this feat in 1978 while playing for the UCLA Bruins. The first male player in NCAA Division I history to record a quadruple-double was Lester Hudson." Both should be cited on first mention in the prose (though I see they are cited in the table, so maybe I'm being picky here)
- "It is unclear whether or not this feat has occurred at the collegiate or the professional level." This contradicts with the lead, which says it definitely hasn't happened.
- Removed because not verifiable—Chris!c/t 07:08, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- Refs #3 and 4 (the point-rebound and point-assist double-doubles) aren't working right. The link goes to a page that doesn't actually show this. I tried to fix it but it didn't work.
- Fixed, I think—Chris!c/t 19:42, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
I'll put this on hold and will do another read-through after words. Ideally a pass is soon. Wizardman 06:39, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good now, so I'll pass this as a GA. Wizardman 01:09, 5 December 2009 (UTC)