Talk:Don't Stand Another Chance/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pixelyoshi (talk · contribs) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC)

Hi, Alex ! I'll be the reviewer. I fixed some minor issues. Π^x (discuter) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC)

Overview

Prose: See below OK

Sourcing: See below OK

Coverage: See below OK

Neutrality: OK

Stability: OK

Details

Lead

• "It was written by Janet Jackson, her brother Marlon Jackson and musician John Barnes, while Marlon also produced it, and provided backing vocals along with his brothers Michael, Tito, and Jackie." It's too long ! => I suggest you, "It was written by Janet Jackson, her brother Marlon Jackson and musician John Barnes. Marlon also produced it, and provided backing vocals along with his brothers Michael, Tito, and Jackie."

Background  Done

Reception

• "Phil Hardy in the book The Da Capo Companion to 20th-century Popular Music stated that "Don't Stand Another Chance" was not much better than dance club ready-songs." => "Phil Hardy wrote in the book... that...". Additionnally, is it a citation ?

Live performances

• Remove "held in New Orleans, Louisiana"

Credits and personnel

• John Barnes is the songwriter not the producer.

References

• ref#9 : the source doesn't state that.
• ref#16 : link Dream Street

Coverage/other issues

• Do you have any details about the song's composition ? lyrics ? genre ? etc.

GA Result:  On hold for seven days Π^x (discuter) 20:34, 12 September 2014 (UTC) ✓ Pass

All done. Details about its composition, although deeply searched by me, were not found. Alex ^{talk page!} 19:59, 13 September 2014 (UTC)

OK. If you find more details about composition, add them to the article. Π^x (discuter) 17:51, 15 September 2014 (UTC)