Talk:Dolphin D. Overton/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk · contribs) 22:09, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

One image has a problem File:Dolph Overton 2009.JPG

Already fixed that. I assumed the bot would take the template down. Done. —Ed!^(talk) 19:44, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Some disamb links need attention Number 13, Distinguished Flying Cross, Tail number, Captain (military) (redirect page) and Captain

Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

In the First Korean War tour section Overton flew 102 combat missions over the course of a 6-month year tour. whats a 6 month year tour and should it be six

Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

In the Second Korean War tour section He also believed any number with a three in it, including the number 13. - is there something missing off the end of the sentence

Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Note 2 needs a cite

Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Well done, interesting guy, just a few small points. Jim Sweeney (talk) 19:52, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your review! —Ed!^(talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)