Talk:Dolls and Dolls/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this is a good article, I just have a couple small concerns:

"She liked the show, due to it being "hysterical" and with "really good writing"."I'd prefer a cite at the end of this sentence, though it's probably cited later.
"Though, it finished in 13th place in the weekly ratings for the week of April 21–27, 2003." Doesn't sound quite right. I'd just get rid of 'though'.
- Done [on both]. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:32, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Just those two things. I'll put it on hold and ~~fail it cuz you're in my wikicup bracket~~ pass it when they're fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:28, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I hope I got your two things... that doesn't sound right. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:32, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yup, you've taken my two things and popped them where they should be :P. The rest looks good so it's now a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 20:12, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. :) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:26, 6 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]