Talk:Doctor Who series 10/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Some Dude From North Carolina, thank you for your review! I believe I've covered all of the changes requested. -- /Alex/₂₁ 02:22, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox looks good but I would recommend improving the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
Remove the comma after "revival in 2005".
Add a comma after "Toby Whithouse".
Remove the comma after "worked on the show".
Add a comma after "plots".
- All done -- /Alex/₂₁ 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the comma after "aliens' ship".
Remove the comma after "investigates the puddle".
"crew were inefficient" → "crew was inefficient"
"which leads" → "that leads"
Remove the comma after "Time Lord technology".
Add a comma after "Chinese".
Remove the comma after "offers his consent".
Remove the comma after "another solution".
Add a comma in between "however the".
"humanity recall" → "humanity recalls"
Add a comma after "The Doctor, Bill".
Add a comma after "The Doctor, Nardole".
Remove the comma after "fights off the Cybermen".
Remove the comma after "body back to his TARDIS".
Remove the comma after "attempts to stop it".
Add a comma after "displaced, confused".
The summaries of "The Pilot", "Extremis", "The Eaters of Light", "World Enough and Time", "The Doctor Falls", and "Twice Upon a Time" need to have less than 200 words.
- All done -- /Alex/₂₁ 02:14, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The second reference after "Radio Times" is missing a website parameter.
Can the four references after "first episode of the series" be distributed?
Mark the only source after "every episode" as dead.
The citation after "episode of Doctor Who" doesn't mention the series.
Add a comma after "Aleksandar Jovanovic".
Mark the reference after "Missy in the series" as dead.
- All done -- /Alex/₂₁ 02:21, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after "6 March 2017".
Remove the comma after "12 June 2017".
Remove the comma after "filming of Class".
- All done -- /Alex/₂₁ 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Add a comma after "On 13 March 2017".
Add a comma after "Mackie, Moffat".
Add a comma after "Mackie, Lucas".
Add a comma after "Capaldi, Mackie".
"less episodes" → "fewer episodes"
"United States and Canada" → "the United States, and Canada"
Add a comma after "16 April in Australia".
- All done -- /Alex/₂₁ 01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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