Talk:Docklands Light Railway/GA1
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GA Reassessment
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As part of the WikiProject Good Articles, we're doing Sweeps to go over all of the current GAs and see if they still meet the GA criteria. So I will be assessing the article. Pyrotec (talk) 19:20, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
Reassessment
[edit]The article is a good article, but there are a number of points that need to be addressed if this artilce is to remain a WP:GA.
They include:
- The WP:lead is a single sentence, and is non-compliant. It may just about introduce the article but it fails to summarise the main points of the article.
Quite a few of the paragraphs are single-sentence paragraphs. Wikipedia:Layout suggests that this should be minimised.
- General description - 1st and 3rd paragraphs are unreferenced. 4th para is single-sentenced.
- Section deleted, put into the Lead.81.111.115.63 (talk) 12:00, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- History - Mostly unreferenced and mostly single-sentenced.
Initial system - 2 & 4th paragraphs unreferenced and two-sentenced.
First extensions - Unreferenced and mostly single-sentenced.
- Second stage extensions - Only the final paragraph is referenced.
- Current system - final two paragraphs are short/bitty.
- Stations - Unreferenced.
Depots - Unreferenced.
- Resolved.81.111.115.63 (talk) 12:00, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Fares and ticketing - Mostly unreferenced.
South Quay bombing - Unreferenced.
Rolling stock - Unreferenced.
Tower Gateway rebuilding - Unreferenced and needs updating.
Upgrading Entire System to 3-car trains - first part is mostly single-sentenced.
- Upgrading Delta Junction - Unreferenced and refers to Summer 2009 events as being in the future (not almost the present).
I will put the GAR On Hold so that these can be addressed.Pyrotec (talk) 20:09, 3 June 2009 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, no progress has been made, and it's June 12. Article delisted. Once it meets the GA criteria again, it can be renominated at WP:GAN.Pyrotec (talk) 21:02, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
- Note: I have begin to address some of these problems following the expiration of this reassessment, I'm hoping to improve the article significantly.81.111.115.63 (talk) 12:00, 25 June 2009 (UTC)