Talk:Dobroslav Jevđević/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk · contribs) 14:01, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
prose: (MoS):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

1. Hoare states that in the autumn of 1942, despite being strongly hostile to the Muslims. Suggest - Remove this sentence

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 14:01, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. Good job. Thurgate (talk) 19:28, 17 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ustaše massacres of 1941

There is this statement in the article: ... the government-in-exile awarded Jevđević the Star of Karađorđe in early 1943 for his services to the Serbian population during the Ustaše massacres of 1941 ... Do the sources say more on these services? If they do, it should be included in the article, probably somewhere at the beginning of the section "World War II". Vladimir (talk) 15:52, 1 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The short answer is no, there is no information I have seen except around the award. My assumption is that he put together armed groups to oppose the Ustase and protect villages in his area, but I haven't found a source for it. I'll keep looking, of course. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 04:17, 2 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]