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A £1 Gift Voucher?

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What


- Hitler (no talk) 17:19, 3 February 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.177.45.29 (talk)

Npov/citations

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The history section uses quite critical language of the chain's management, which may be correct but needs citations and a more factual tone. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.16.130.239 (talk) 00:11, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

General rewrite

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Much of the copy was chronologically confused, badly written (unidiomatic) and unencyclopaedic in tone. I have tried to rectify many of these issues and give the copy a more neutral tone.