Talk:Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Mention Hassan in the lead
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "He did poorly in his heat due to an ankle injury, and did not win a medal." - and despite not winning a medal, he was cheered on by the crowd as he ran alone on the track for two laps.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Background

• "The event was from August 29 to September 9." - The event was held from August 29 to September 9.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "The country had one athlete compete, in the men's 1500m T46." - 1500 meters
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Athletics

• Is there any information that states how Hassan qualified for the Paralympics? Is so, that would be useful to have in the article.
  • I tried English and French Google, but neither returned anything. Do you have any good places to look? Kees08 (Talk)
• "competed in the men's 1,500m T46" - same issue as in the background section
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• You should add the mention of the ankle injury Hassan sustained in this section as you have done in the lede
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Hassan finished with a time of 11:23.50, a season best." - try: Hassan finished the race with a season-best time of 11:23.50.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

References

• Reference two is missing the date it was published
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Remove the Djibouti sports stub template
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

That is all the issues I discovered during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:24, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

@MWright96: Fixed all the issues I could. Kees08 (Talk) 03:59, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

@Kees08: Regarding the qualification aspect, I myself could not locate the exact reason despite my best efforts or the Paralympics website sources are not specific enough in this instance. Nevertheless, this article is now a GA. MWright96 (talk) 11:46, 19 April 2018 (UTC)