Talk:Djibouti at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
Well I have had a read of this article and I can see very few issues in this article:
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Well either this is a good article or I am rubbish at reviewing articles. And comparing this to other "at the 2008 Summer Olympics" articles, I think it's the former. Nonetheless, I did find a couple of issues:
Lead section
- "Djibouti's only Olympic medalist, was selected as the flag bearer for both the opening and closing ceremonies despite not competing in 2008." - Link flag bearer to List of flag bearers for Djibouti at the Olympics. That way, we don't need the See also section.
Athletics
- Merge both the Men's and Women's competition sections together. No need to have them separate in my opinion.
- "Competing at her first olympics" - cap Olympics.
- "Feraez was 3.16 seconds behind the fastest athlete and 0.48 seconds behind the slowest athlete who progressed to the semi-finals, Thi Huong Vu." - after this sentence, perhaps you can add "Therefore, she did not advance to later rounds." Either that or something similar.
See also
- See above. No need for this section.
Going to promote once these issues are sorted. Nice job. good888 (talk) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)
- @Good888:, thanks for the review, I've done all your changes - NickGibson3900 Talk 02:38, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
- @NickGibson3900:, as promised, I am going to promote this to GA class. good888 (talk) 08:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)