Talk:Djibouti at the 2000 Summer Olympics

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Date	Process	Result
January 1, 2017	Good article nominee	Listed
April 11, 2017	Good topic candidate	Promoted
March 29, 2022	Good topic removal candidate	Demoted

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GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

A few minor mistakes...

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
See below.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
Citations are inconsistent. Some dates have different formats and some publishers are missing in some citations. Use the "External links" link in the "GA Toolbox" sidebar to find the mistakes.
Done--Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
Expanded recently (Beginning on January 1).
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comments

Soul -> Seoul
Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Be consistent with the linking of the cities (Seoul and Barcelona).
Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:32, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"As of 2000" is kinda redundant.
Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:34, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"She set a new record for her nation upon competing, being the youngest athlete to represent Djibouti, at the age of 16 years and 162 days.[7] She was also the first female to represent Djibouti in the Olympic games.[8] She competed in the second heat of the women's 800 metres on 22 September. She finished last in the heat of eight athletes, with a time of two minutes and 31.74 seconds." More sentence variety needed (at least don't started consecutive sentences with "She").
Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:36, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@CycloneIsaac: Fixed everything --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:38, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]