Talk:Dishaster/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wirenote (talk · contribs) 23:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article. Note that I am still not too great with GAN yet. wirenote (talk) 23:35, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. I look forward to it. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 23:42, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

1. "The game received negative reviews; much of the criticism focused on the game's repetition and monotony." I see only one review focused on the monotony. Please reword this sentence.
2. "The girl can stabilize wobbling dishes by pressing the button." girl should be player.
3. "The TV Gamer reviewer" -> "The reviewer for TV Gamer magazine"

Hmm... It's a wee bit short. But I guess if stuff like Let's Cook! with Jamie Oliver can be a GA, I guess this one can too. wirenote (talk) 22:41, 13 June 2014 (UTC)

• Thank you for the review. I addressed these. (And I think you mean What's Cooking? with Jamie Oliver.) Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 16:14, 14 June 2014 (UTC)