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Reviewer:  (talk · contribs) 11:35, 7 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Lead

  • became available exclusively → sounds weird, try "was released exclusively" or some sort of thing

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  • music critics, who

 Done

Background

  • Songwriting and production for Long Distance took several years for Ivy to finalize → Try "It took several years for... to finalize..."

 Done

  • When was the album released that the songs were "several years old"?

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Promotion

  • "In promotion for" → bizarre

 Done