Talk:Dipylon Krater

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So far, it is a very well designed article already. When you say "The monumental vase is hollow at the bottom, reinforcing its function as a grave marker and not a mixing bowl", did you mean that there is a hole in the bottom that would allow liquid to flow out? You might want to clarify how/why a hollow in the bottom makes it a grave marker. A small caption under the picture would be useful.

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Sunni's Comment

Hi Noah, I think your article looks good so far! Your description of the krater itself is well written and detailed. I think you could even compare this maybe to other geometric kraters to show why this one is more important. Overall, keep working it looks great. Sunniobrien (talk) 21:45, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Sunni O'Brien[reply]

Comments from Prof. Paga

Hi Noah - this is a great start to your article! Here are a few suggestions for improvement.

Make sure to put the citations after the punctuation (this is Wikipedia's preferred style).
In the last sentence, you write "...and reveals" but this makes it ungrammatical. Remove the "and."
The krater in the MET is 1 example of a Diyplon krater. In fact, this is a term for all monumental kraters found in Athens near the Dipylon Gate and used for burial purposes. You should edit your article to reflect that this is a broad category. You can keep your description of the MET vase as an example of the Dipylon Krater genre.

Jpaga (talk) 16:04, 2 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]