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Reviewer: Philosopher (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Here we go. For reference, the review refers to this version of the article. – Philosopher Let us reason together. 14:12, 9 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

1a.

  • The "Taking Nefertiti with him" sentence in #Plot has an awkward construction. John is "from" place "in" time, while the Ponds are "after he last saw them". Either split the sentences or use a parallel construction.

1b.

  • What's up with this content? It's present but commented out of the article.

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2.

  • Do you have a citation for ""Dinosaurs on a Spaceship" received generally positive reviews from critics, with a few detractors."? I don't know if there are any "meta-reviews" out there, but if there are, a source would be nice here. (Optional for this GAR, given the other sources, though.)

2c. I just spot-checked the references; here's what I found. The first two need to be addressed.

6b.

I believe I have fixed everything. Thanks for reviewing this! Glimmer721 talk 18:26, 9 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No problem, thanks for your work on the article! – Philosopher Let us reason together. 09:11, 10 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]