Talk:Dingyuan-class ironclad/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 04:01, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 04:01, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
- Section 1;
- Naval conflicts with Western powers; could you get in some examples?
- viceroy; I think "v" must be capital; and "viceroy" of what?
- Section 1.1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and link s in right place
- Section 1.2;
- 31.5-long-ton (32.0 t); be consistent, remove -
- Link stern
- barbettes; this is over linked
- 3 inches (7.6 centimetres); abbreviate units
- 8 inches (20 centimetres); abbreviate units
- 3–0.5 inches (7.6–1.3 centimetres); abbreviate units
- Section 3;
- Link Captain
- pre-assigned; it is single word, remove -
- and began to sink, She was quickly; replace , with .
- Remove section 6 as it is empty. Move the commons box to the last section.
- Make sure that all the units in the infobox are abbreviated.
- All good with dab and external links. 0% violation, good job.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:52, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing, I've made those changes as suggested with the exception of the commons link, which I switched from the box template to an inline link. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:22, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: