Talk:Dilek Peninsula-Büyük Menderes Delta National Park

GA review/To do list (transferred it to here as a to do list)

It is well written

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and it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

For consistency change east-west in the first sentence under the geography section to east to west.

•  Done Changed to east to west.

The Mycale Strait separates the peninsula from the nearby island of Samos. Named after Mount Mycale, it is only about 1.6 km (0.99 mi) long at its narrowest point, making it one of the smallest straits within the region of the Aegean Sea. Change the first it in the second sentence to the strait to be more specific.

•  Done Changed sentence to that. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:37, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

As a result, these beaches tend to attract more experienced swimmers, and locals rather than tourists. Remove comma between swimmers and the word and.

•  Done Removed comma. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:37, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

In the Cave of Zeus section, clearly establish that the cave is located within the National Park.

•  Done Coderenius (☎) 19:00, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

In the Cave of Zeus section, split the sentence The entrance is dense in vegetation, covering parts of it, and there is also a wishing tree that people tie objects to in order to make a wish, in the hope that it will be granted. into two separate sentences, one about dense vegetation, one about the wishing tree.

•  Done Split this into 2 sentences with the first one about dense vegetation and the other about the wishing tree. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:37, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Its highest mountain, Dilek Dağı, is approximately 1,237 metres (4,058 ft) AMSL high Change Dilek Dağı to Mount Mycale and remove AMSL.

•  Done I changed it to Mount Mycale and I removed AMSL. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:37, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Events could be moved to the history section, rather than the activity section.

•  Done Moved events under history section. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:37, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

Optional edit-In the first sentence under the history section: For most of the area's existence, the lands from the peninsula southwards to the river delta were uninhabited by people or very sparsely settled, and were otherwise untouched by human influence., be more specific as to what peninsula and river delta are being mentioned. This may seem a bit peculiar, but it would be better to have this information than not.

•  Done Described the section in more detail, including the changes requested here. Coderenius (☎) 19:00, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

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Be more specific as to what trail is being talked about in the caption An outlook from the trail OR change the caption to "An outlook from a trail"

•  Done Changed caption to "An outlook from a trail" since image does not specifically describe which trail is being discussed. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:43, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

A view of the trail with Mycale in the background Be more specific as to what trail is being talked about OR change the caption to: A view of the park with Mycale in the background.

•  Done Changed caption to "A view of the park with Mycale in the background" since image does not specifically describe which trail is being discussed. Ssbbplayer (talk) 22:43, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

A close view from the path Be more specific as to what the view is of. Also change the path to the name of the path OR change the path to a path.

•  Done Changed to A view of a boat and one of the peninsula's smaller coves seen from a path facing west, far more specific Coderenius (☎) 19:00, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Change the caption Mount Mycale to A view of Mount Mycale

•  Done Changed caption to "A view of Mount Mycale".

For the caption A small cove along the shore be more specific as to what "the shore" is.

•  Done Changed to A small cove along the northern shore of the peninsula. Coderenius (☎) 19:00, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Dilek Peninsula-Büyük Menderes Delta National Park/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Will211 (talk · contribs) 04:19, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

Comment

This review is probably going to be quick, as all of the problems I had in the first GA Review have been fixed. I may however, find other issues, which I will post below.

It is well written

the prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct

and it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.

I fixed some grammar errors that I found, but everything looks good now.

Verifiable with no original research

it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline

all in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines

it contains no original research

it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism

This is the only area in which I can find any problems. Using checklinks, I found two sources that have issues. For reference 17, the website cannot be reached, and reference 30 comes up with a 404 error. Any information that is in the article and relies on these two sources would have to be referenced with different websites.

Neutral

it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each

Stable

it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate

images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content

images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions

Nice job with fixing the descriptions, everything looks good now!

Overall

The sources problem is the only thing that needs to be fixed. When these issues are fixed, the article can be passed Will211 (talk) 06:30, 15 March 2016 (UTC)

Alright, I see that the references have been fixed. With the gallery, I think the topographic model would be good to put in the article, but that's your decision. Since the problems have been fixed, this article can pass. Will211 (talk) 00:50, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

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Greek names

I think it would be useful for the general reader to include all the old greek place names in brackets after the current Turkish ones. Personally I find such articles a bit confusing and have to constantly Google the place names to find ones I recognise. This applies to all Anatolian articles. 109.144.215.166 (talk) 20:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC)