Talk:Dick Harris (center)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 18:15, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:15, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:21, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I'd like the lead to be a little longer.
"something only one other Longhorn ever accomplished (Bobby Layne)" Does that mean up to that point, or present day?
"the second-best center in Wichita Falls history" Does that mean the high school or just people from that town?
That's all I could find for this one. Great work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:21, 23 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@WikiOriginal-9: Added a little to the lead, corrected the 'second-best' part. As for the Bobby Layne part, I'm not completely sure. It's from his Texas Hall of Fame profile; he was inducted in 1971. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:43, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The SWC ceased to exist in 1996 , so I'd say the online Hall of Fame profile is right. Passing the article. Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 18:14, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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