Talk:Devil Pray/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:03, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Calvin999 thanks for taking this up, but would you mind if I ask you to review some of the older nominations if you please? I just nominated this yesterday so I think it can wait for sometime. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 13:25, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You're the nominator?? — Calvin999 20:27, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

If you check the history I had nominated it on behalf of FanofPopMusic after making updates to the article. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 04:30, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I did check the history. Why have you nominated it on his behalf and why not include yourself as a co-nominator? — Calvin999 09:00, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

~~I wanted to, then thought leave it. Let FOPM have the full credit.~~ Chuck that, I went ahead and added my name, I did quite the cleanup for the whole article myself too. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 09:14, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Lol, okay. — Calvin999 09:33, 5 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

There is one dead link here. I tried opening it but it's just a home page
I'd alphabetise the record labels in the info box
Is Madonna credited in the booklet as just Madonna, or Madonna Ciccone? I thought for songwriting credits, she used the later
by American singer → by American singer and songwriter
While on early stages of the album, → During the early stages of the album,
Madonna was encouraged by her manager to work with him and his team of songwriters. → Who?
worked in seven → worked on seven
was born after → was composed after
and the search → and her search?
, and the desire → Remove 'and' (too many successive uses of 'and' in this sentence)
with musical similarity → with similarities
from music critics → from critics
reaching the top-twenty in five countries. → list them
of his hits. → of his music.
There is a lot of repetition of 'the song' in the Critical reception section, but you only write "Devil Pray" once at the start. Some more variety is needed.
I don't think there's any need to overlook the people involved in the Credits and personnel section.
Ref 4: Digital Spy shouldn't be italics
Same for Ref 6 (Are you choosing to link every instance the publication is used?)

Outcome

I like this song and the article is good. On hold for 7 days though I'm sure you won't need that. — Calvin999 11:57, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Calvin999 thanks again for taking the time to review and I'm glad you like the song, even its one of my favorites too. I have addressed all the points so please check and let me know if I missed anything. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 13:32, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA. — Calvin999 13:38, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]