Talk:Devil Dinosaur

Summarize?

I have added bibliographical information that includes short summaries. Some comic book character pages such as Spider-man and Hulk have bibliographies without summaries in a "Bibliography" section at the end, while others have plot summary information with limited bibliographic information in a section titled "Publication History". Given the information I have added, which of the above two configurations would be more consistent with other comic book character pages? Mainehaven 20:04, 19 January 2007 (UTC)

After receiving direction at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Comics regarding the above question, I have begun editing the article to conform to Wikiproject Comics exemplars. Next step will be to edit the "Fictional character biography" to read as a biography rather than a list and to move the issue information there to the "Reference" section at the bottom. Mainehaven 19:30, 6 February 2007 (UTC)

I'm going to try to make this look more like the other comics' articles do, by putting the issue titles as refs rather than as headers. 207.229.140.148 (talk) 20:25, 30 December 2007 (UTC)

The biography has now been made a more of a biography rather than a list, references have been moved to the proper section, and the biographical info has been ordered chronologically according in-comic time. However the biography still reads in certain sections more like a list of facts than a biography. Editing to make the biography flow better is required.Mainehaven (talk) 19:05, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

Passive voice

• Why would you change my edit to put everything in the passive voice? That seems like a bad idea. Universaladdress 08:12, 2 July 2007 (UTC)
• Thought changing it to passive voice would make it tie in better with the other "Fictional character biography" entries which were in passive voice. Mainehaven 21:55, 17 August 2007 (UTC)

External links modified

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 3 external links on Devil Dinosaur. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20071013060643/http://comicon.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic%3Bf%3D36%3Bt%3D004516 to http://www.comicon.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic%3Bf%3D36%3Bt%3D004516
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20070711133600/http://www.wizarduniverse.com/magazine/wizard/000765389.cfm to http://www.wizarduniverse.com/magazine/wizard/000765389.cfm
• Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20130827064704/http://comicsalliance.com/hulk-and-the-agents-of-smash-cort-lane-paul-dini-marvel-interview/ to http://comicsalliance.com/hulk-and-the-agents-of-smash-cort-lane-paul-dini-marvel-interview/

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

• If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
• If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 20:57, 31 March 2017 (UTC)