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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 04:58, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
Will review. @Nvvchar: Very well-written article! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 04:58, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. User:Ms Sarah Welch who has collaborated with me will also clarify some issues raised by you.
Lead
[edit]- Who is Cheever Mackenzie Brown?
- Added, with source
- Brahman (ultimate metaphysical Reality), from her arise Prakṛti ..."and" from her...
- Done by @Nvvchar
- she is bliss and non-bliss, the Vedas and what is different from it, the born and the unborn, and all of the universe make this a separate line.
- Done by @Nvvchar
Foundation and structure
[edit]- Link Brahman
- Done
- asserts that from Goddess "the" Goddess
- Done by @Nvvchar
Contents
[edit]- Brahman should be linked in the earlier section, not here.
- Agreed. Done. All later duplinks removed.
- Is not the definition of Brahman getting repeated here?
- Yes. Removed repetition. The sources have been checked and moved to the sections above.
- In the 2nd line, italics have not been used properly.
- Corrected.
- Identify Griffith, McDaniel
- Added, with source/wikilink.
- "Begat" is an archaic word. Use modern spellings
- Yes. Rephrased after checking source.
- All knowing knowledge What does this mean?
- Probably a drafting error. Changed to "All knowledge...".
Influence in Tantra
[edit]- Simply say McDaniel.
- Done by @Nvvchar
- Duplinks: mantra, shakti, Saraswati
- Done by @Nvvchar
List of duplinks:
- Who is the Goddess? - Purusha, Prakrti
- The sources assert she is both. Duplinks removed.
- Devi stuti and iconography - Vedas,Rudras,Adityas,Soma,Prajapati, Indra
- Removed.
@Sainsf: I also removed all cites from the lead, something that required moving some text and all sources to the main article. So you will see two new sections Etymology and History. @Nvvchar: Please double check my edits and if I missed anything or duplinks, please fix. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 17:36, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
- @Sainsf: The lead and the text have been slightly reorganized in view of shiting of refrences from the lead. Other wise all review issue have been addressed.Nvvchar. 01:04, 4 February 2016 (UTC)
- @Nvvchar: Promoted. Congrats! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 05:48, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you very much, @Sainsf:.Nvvchar. 05:55, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
- @Nvvchar: Promoted. Congrats! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 05:48, 6 February 2016 (UTC)